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Bloody_Demise · Site Admin Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 264

I got bored on Monday night, as no one being on but me cause I am on spring break, and so I crafted out this general rough and basic story line for both sides, I did it in my image program so I could do diagrams of the line of power and such, but theres only one for each, but I think they should make sense with the text I've provided! Enjoy!!

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a79/BDBDBDBD/StorylineHum.jpg

http://i9.photobucket.com/albums/a79/BDBDBDBD/StorylineOrc.jpg

Post any comments suggestions agree'ances or stuff please, feedback is wanted!

The_Dead_dk · Posted: Tue Mar 27, 2007 3:20 am Post subject:

I like the human storyline idea! It's very open to skills, stats, placement on the map (except that some have to be placed with certain other chars and so).

For the orcs, use the shadow hunter (or regular shammy?) model for Awk'Tha I'd say. I think this storyline is a bit more... needed to work some more on since it lacks some stuff (not enough reason for Tol'Gra and Awk'Tha or anything is the main problem). Also I think we should get a bit more geographical information on the orcs as well as some information regarding if the orc heroes are just very strong compared to the human heroes (since the amount of heroes differ a lot!).

Good job on it this far Bloody but it diffinately needs some more work!
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Bloody_Demise · Site Admin Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 264

Clearly, I went to bed right after, it was just a rough idea, however I think the storyline for Grawk and Shawk is pretty solid.

Tendencies · Follower Joined: 25 Mar 2007 Posts: 218

Heh, nice storylines, but the random appearances of heroes needs to be fixed... history on heroes, etc. Mainly the Orc heroes though (Not Grawk and Shawk). It's pretty good for a quick draft though.

Bloody_Demise · Site Admin Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 264

yeah Grawk and Shawk were covered pretty good, I think I might make the four of themall best friends, so its easier

The_Dead_dk · Posted: Wed Mar 28, 2007 3:04 am Post subject:

Yea... but Bloody... little piece of advice, don't make the names too similar to each other, makes things look a lot more newb like!

(also I don't think Grawk and Shawk are good names...)
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Bloody_Demise · Site Admin Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 264

I wouldn't mind the namees being similar, kind of gives the idea they're brothers. Also here's a list of names I created while I was working today, (over the course of like 7 hours -_- anyways here they are!

Orcs:
Grall'nar
Tassadam
Zorto
Taku
Tagnius
Kurgol
Kopa
Korana
Barkna
Kastro
Zawa
Pegu
Kong
Korthog

Humans:
Lorosa
Seiler
Clement
Morrison
Toman
mc Gregor
Sadok
Windsor
Moore
Eden
Essin
Winoba

These names can be used in any combination to make names, as well as any of your own, please suggest names and whom they would replace referring to the storyline

The_Dead_dk · Posted: Thu Mar 29, 2007 12:31 am Post subject:

I think your orc names lack some... "orcishness" sometimes... and the humans have partially orc names!

Refering to:
Windsor
Winoba
Sadok (only a bit since it can be used for humans)

Something to think of Bloody?
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Bloody_Demise · Site Admin Joined: 30 Jan 2007 Posts: 264

they arnt neccisarily human names, I just created them and put em in a category, switch em up use human names, orc names should have strong T's, Z's, K's or G's, as human names should sound more roll-off the toungue, like italian or french for example

The_Dead_dk · Posted: Sat Mar 31, 2007 7:45 am Post subject:

You read my mind Razz

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